Monday, February 22, 2016

Thoreau Argumentative Editorial

Henry David Thoreau is a Transcendentalist writer from Concord, Massachusetts, his book “Walden” describes his life in relative seclusion on Walden Pond and what he learns. Thoreau believes in simple sufficient living, self improvement, and possesses a condescending perspective on society. His word choice of “Renew thyself completely each day” and “we do not ride on the railroad; it rides upon us” reflect his ideas on society and the individual.
Thoreau’s ideas are the needed panacea for the many ills of contemporary society, if taken in small doses they could be very effective. Contemporary life is full of many unnecessary advancements that impact people negatively, such as television that emphasizes an indoor lifestyle. If people began to live simpler lives little by little like Thoreau then they too could “live deep and suck the marrow of life” as he does. Meaning that people could enjoy a life like it is meant to be lived; carefree, without superficial luxuries, focused on improving oneself, and becoming better people; instead of being wrapped up in superficial society.
The argument that Thoreau’s ideas are not applicable in modern society could be brought up, but this is not true. Thoreau himself used the railroad as an aspect of society that has dominance and control over people, not vice versa like most people assume; the railroad example can be swapped for multiple contemporary examples, cars, planes, and even the internet. Also people being frustrated with their lives has always occurred, Thoreau’s philosophy of simplicity is a product of Thoreau suffering in a “superficial society” himself.
Humanity over complicate their lives, a simple life like the Thoreau pursued for two years is the best for the spirit. Taking time to be with yourself, and learning from this lifestyle would improve the lives of people everywhere.

2 comments:

  1. I first love the way you introduce Thoreau's ideas by using strong quotes and explaining what they mean. Furthermore, your use of language is very good and it adds complexity to your argument. Your examples are good and they tie into today society. One little tiny thing that bothered me was that you didn't include more examples of today but overall your essay is well written and your argument is really strong.

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  2. Your choice of language was very good, the essay is organized, and your statement of the authors argument is pretty good. However I feel that its the language and vocabulary that distracted you from providing examples on modern day society. You barely touched on it but your description of Thoreau's ideas are very good, good work overall.

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